Why I Swim in the Rain
Everyone else has left
but immersed in the water
I gaze
from lake to wooded shoreline
longingly waiting
as lush green branches
gently bend and sway
against heavy grey clouds
that finally let go
of taut liquid threads,
tapping leaves
that shimmer and shake,
as the deep scent of soil
fills the air
I embrace the delicate rhythm
of plinks and plunks,
the bubbles
that suddenly surface,
then almost as suddenly burst
and the plunging drops
whose splash-back spurts
retreat into circular ripples
as slowly swimming,
I stir myself
into the sweetness
of solitude
by Joan Kantor
Editor’s Note: The careful line breaks (especially the first) create a sense of rippling calm that perfectly support the narrator’s meditative stubbornness.
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