Dirt Roads
Those childhood highway trips I’d stare
out at the passing cornfield miles
from my backseat vantage, wondering where
they went – those intermittent trails
that stretched away in the opposite direction
from our rushing car; I’d strain my eyes
as we made good time, tracing one down
as far as I could, following always
some pick-up’s slow cloud as it bumped along
the thin line of dust, past cows, a farm,
to a town I imagined beyond the shifting
green curtain, a secret place that time
had lost on that road that never arrived
but just kept going forever straight,
then vanished like that as we left it behind,
the pick-up this tiny red speck afloat.
by Elise Hempel, first published in Measure: A Review of Formal Poetry.
Editor’s Note: The imagery in this poem floats along the meter in one long sentence. The breathlessness of the final line mirrors that of a dream, a memory, or a wish.
Robert Frost’s favorite insect was the water spider because of how it could be so steady in even the fastest water, just as this poem rides its current on these beautifully enjambed lines.
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Delighted to see this. Hooray, Elise
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