Wings of Pain
Rooted memories, Slumberless brain
Insomniac hours, profound insanity.
The curse it’s casted in my veins,
Yes, I can bleed till the eternity.
Insomniac hours, profound insanity.
Soberness, bold and strong it reigns.
Yes, I can bleed till the eternity,
For all these years, inked in your name.
Soberness, bold and strong, it reigns.
Surreal day dreams and the hurling rain.
For all these years, inked in your name,
Now at bliss, flying with the wings of pain.
Surreal day dreams, and the hurling rain,
Sorry Angels, I don’t wanna go home.
Now at bliss, flying with the wings of pain
The attempt though vain, but I can’t leave her alone.
Sorry Angels, I don’t wanna go home,
Insomniac hours, profound insanity.
The attempt though vain, but I can’t leave her alone,
Yes, I can bleed till the eternity.
by Arjun Dahal
Guest Editor’s Note: The glose (or “glosa”) is a difficult Spanish form: a “cabeza” or “head” stanza from which a line will be taken in all subsequent (“texte”) stanzas. The abstractions and inversions could be jarring to a modern audience but may be entirely appropriate here.
Please welcome Guest Editor Earl Gray from March 20-March 24, 2017.
I really liked it. It is most difficult to write about pain and I think the poet did an excellent job. Very descriptive and chilling in its authenticity.
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Hi! “Guest” editor “Earl Gray”? Is that a reference to you caffeine addiction??? Hmm?…just saying…lol OldPoetMan
On Wed, Mar 22, 2017 at 5:03 AM, Autumn Sky Poetry Daily wrote:
> Christine Klocek-Lim posted: “Wings of Pain Rooted memories, Slumberless > brain Insomniac hours, profound insanity. The curse it’s casted in my > veins, Yes, I can bleed till the eternity. Insomniac hours, profound > insanity. Soberness, bold and strong it reigns. Yes, I can ble” >
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You have explained pain in words and the use of words are tremendously powerful. Good job keep it up !!
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Nice one mate
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You have written many beautiful poems about love and broken heart bt very few on healing broken heart so willing to see u writing more about healing broken heart so that ppl would feel gud reading Ur poems n could heal easily frm broken life…
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